Wednesday 13 March 2013

The impact of My Lass – An Ode to My Valentine


The impact of My Lass – An Ode to My Valentine
























In those golden days of yore,
When mind traversed free and pure, 
Visions profound had dreams deep and tender,
And Emotions abound knew no relationship slender,
Horizons beyond sky refrained to mark the bound,
And Fantasies developed to grow bigger and unbound.  

Thence you made your way my Lass,
                             Stealthily, steadily but eternally,
Only to craft and mentor your man,
                             Candidly, constantly and ever-lastingly.

The extending of hand unprecedented,
And hug of heart without fear but fervor,
The euphoria of lucid acceptance,
And the joy enormous and unparalleled,
Gave the confidence to surge ahead, 
Always, for everything, least fearing for outcome abound.

And thou continued your way, my Lass,
                             Stealthily, steadily but eternally,
Only to craft and mentor your man,
                            Candidly, constantly and ever-lastingly.

Your coming with thoughts confused,
Laying thy head on my shoulder diffused,
An atmosphere of sheer conviction,
And the aura of trust and faith as fiction,
Taught me to rationale my thoughts,
And be worthier still, devoted further and forever.

And thus you continued your way my Lass,
                             Stealthily, steadily but eternally,
Only to craft and mentor your man,
                             Candidly, constantly and ever-lastingly

Your tender readiness to submit and un-sublime,
With eyes shy and fervent benign,
A portray of serene charm and chastity,
And paradise of splendour and tranquillity combine,
Made me arduous to be laden with responsibility,
And be trustworthy still, controlling my emotions, sensibly, surer.

Still you paved your way my Lass,
                             Stealthily, steadily but eternally,
Only to craft and mentor your man,
                             Candidly, constantly and ever-lastingly

The palpable scold and the rage of fury squabble,
With love intense in eyes and melancholy deeper in soul,
An affection of relation unnamed, pure and true as in a fable,
And enigma though, a muddle of sentiments passionate and gentle,
Made me careful further, entrusted with commitment forever,
Taught the essence of time, perpetuity of past, present and future.

Further you paved your way my Lass,
                             Stealthily, steadily but eternally,
Only to craft and mentor your man,
                             Candidly, constantly and ever-lastingly

Your sweet succumb to world’s cruel truth,
With heart never in consensus to the mind in blue,
A dilemma of blissful realism or dismal destiny unseen,
And on cloud nine still, but with dubious thrill and wisdom numb.
Mentored me stern as nut with heart soft and caring yet,
An approach practical to life, be ready for worst, always hoping for the best.

And thus you not only paved your way my Lass,
                             Stealthily, steadily but eternally,
Only to craft and mentor your man,
                             Candidly, constantly and ever-lastingly

                             But dwell there perpetually my Lass
                             Concealed, coveted and revered for ever.


Aditya Sinha
Lucknow

End Note :

A very simple thought .... An Ode to one's Valentine. This runs through the developments of how a girl sets into the characters life and slowly becomes a part for ever.

This poem was written in Feb 2009 , for Sulekha, and was posted there around the same time as

http://creative.sulekha.com/the-impact-of-my-lass-an-ode-to-my-valentine_74047_blog

Photo : From Net.

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To My sweet Valentine
Reliving The Love Moments
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4 comments:

  1. Superb Adi, hats off, very rich crafting.... a new you is seen now.....keep writing...kudos
    REGARDS
    aRUNENDRA sONI

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    1. Thanks a lot Arunendra. Thanks fr spending time here. Just try to scribble some thoughts. Keep visiting this page.

      Regards,

      Aditya

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  2. Your poems are well-crafted, and they flow well as I read through them.

    You're gifted naturally.

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  3. Thanks Rathna, Thanks a lot. Do keep visiting this page and sparing time to scribble your thoughts.

    Thanks

    Adi

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